Monday, May 9, 2016

Walking to the cabin

Log cabin I walked through the forest W.A.L.T describe It was a lovely sunny Autumn day. My friend and I were talking loudly while we walked on the muddy path through the colorful forest. While we were walking we noticed lots of animals, there were singing birds, brown bears, white rabbits, spiky hedgehogs and spotted dears. We stopped at a fallen tree by a dirty lake to rest and eat our lunch. We packed 1 litre of juice, 2 bottles of water, four jam sandwiches and two round doughnuts. After our lunch we kept on walking through the forest, we could see big Kauri trees and small spiky trees, with red leaves. It was dark when we got to an empty spot all that was there was a old family log cabin with mini Christmas trees around the area, a brick chimney, a stone fence and a duck pond on the side. I strolled over to the door...

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  1. I saw that you added a of of adjectives but I felt like you should try to add some strong verbs and personification.

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